There were cracks on the buildings.
There were cracks on the roads.
There was a flood on the roads.
People were trapped in the buildings.
The buildings had cracks and the bricks came off.
Lots of buildings fell down and some people died.
Lots of people went to a park to be safe and no building could fall on them.
The people are very sad and frightened and they were running away to get safe.
The helicopters were looking to see the buildings.
A building fell on a bus.
Some people had injuries and were bleeding and hurt.
The top of the church fell off.
People went to the airport to go back home.
We feel very sad that it happened. We hope the people get better soon.
There were cracks on the roads.
There was a flood on the roads.
People were trapped in the buildings.
The buildings had cracks and the bricks came off.
Lots of buildings fell down and some people died.
Lots of people went to a park to be safe and no building could fall on them.
The people are very sad and frightened and they were running away to get safe.
The helicopters were looking to see the buildings.
A building fell on a bus.
Some people had injuries and were bleeding and hurt.
The top of the church fell off.
People went to the airport to go back home.
We feel very sad that it happened. We hope the people get better soon.
1 comments:
What a great piece of writing. I am a teaching in Taupo and we are going to write about the earthquake tomorrow. Can I please use your writing as a model?
Regards
Tracey Burley
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